Unveiled



So, anyways it was at the beginning of October and Walmart already had out costumes and stuff. Halloween is one of my favorite holidays, and so I begged my dad’s girlfriend to come with me to look at costumes. We were on our way back from the costumes when we saw it. The Walcreature. She was wearing a black and purple mini-skirt, a black t-shirt, a small top hat with a black veil on it, fishnet stockings, and white go-go boots. She had bright scarlet hair and was wearing purple eyeliner and pale foundation. The Walcreature, deeply absorbed by the task of walking to her next destination, didn’t notice my dad’s girlfriend and I snicker as she walked past.

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  1. Jenn

    :::gasp:::
    The horror! Seeing someone dressed in Gothic clothing out in public! How ever did you survive?
    Kudos to her for being confident in herself to wear her alternative dress. Raspberries to you for your immaturity and wasting my time reading your lame story.

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    January 30th, 2012

  2. Susan

    And we care, because?

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    January 30th, 2012

  3. The Lord of Cheese

    Don’t worry about the other commenters. I feel the same way when I see people dressed in A&F, GAP, Polo, AE and every other brand that’s just a walking billboard, completing the ensemble with over-styled hair, cosmetics designed for tweens and Uggs worn as outerwear instead of as house shoes.

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    January 30th, 2012

  4. So anyways, OMG…and stuff. She probably snickered at you for abusing the English language.

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    January 30th, 2012

  5. jess

    I am now a bit dumber for reading that stupid story!!!

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    January 30th, 2012

  6. thingamajig

    You get all kinds on this site.

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    January 31st, 2012

  7. Lan

    Cool story, bro.

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    January 31st, 2012

  8. I agree with Jenn 100%. Had I heard you and your obviously immature wanna-be step mom snicker as you walked passed ME in Walmart, I would have back-handed her for being such a poor role model, then I would have spit in your face for being so goddamn disrespectful. You’re both ignorant bitches, and it’s because of people like you that people like me hate the world and 99% of the people in it. People like you make goth high school kids want to kill themselves. I hope you’re proud of being a bully. Do us all a favor and go chug bleach. Lots of it. kthnxbye<3

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    January 31st, 2012

  9. girl watcher

    @Bianca

    She also misused I/me. It’s not “she didn’t notice I snicker” it’s “she didn’t notice me snicker.”
    This dumb kid needs to spend more time in school and less in WalMart.

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    January 31st, 2012

  10. Jenny-Anne

    My reply is to MEGZ.
    How DARE you call them bullies while you’re admitting you would have resorted to violence and battery over someone laughing at you. How DARE you call them bullies while in the same post you tell them to “go chug bleach”. Bullies come in all shapes and forms Meg, and YOU are a bully just as much as they are.
    I’m 32 years old and have been laughed at most of my life for one reason or another.
    Freaking deal with it, or don’t leave the house.

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    February 1st, 2012

  11. Redshirt

    Photos….or it didn’t happen.

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    February 2nd, 2012

  12. JEFFRO BODINE

    @Jenny-Anne We’re still laughing at you so avoid sharp objects today.

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    February 2nd, 2012

  13. CSA

    Hey, maybe she did notice your immature snickering, and just didn’t give a flat f*ck, that’s why she dresses the way she does…cause she don’t care what others think…kudos to her, and as to your response…same back atchya!!

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    February 3rd, 2012

  14. Kittee

    Bitch please. You act like you never seen a goth chick before. I wore that shit in high school. I would rather be a freak than a closed minded little turd like you.

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    February 10th, 2012

  15. James

    The “creature” in question sounds like an individual, and dare I say, fairly hot. Let’s not pile on the OP yet though, shes obviously from a small town and shes pretty young. Her father’s gf, however, can snort sand.

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    March 5th, 2012

  16. Caroline

    You know what im getting all these really mean comments on my story but seriously all basically are really rude. First of all, she will not be my stepmom but she is really nice. So dont insult her. Anyways im only twelve and your posting alot of really nasty comments. so basically what im saying is shut your freakin mouths. And if your about to post a comment think about what your gonna type. And for your information, im am in the top 90 percent smartest kids in the u.s

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    April 1st, 2012

  17. Maggie

    Caroline, you posted an extremely judgmental and mean-spirited story and you’re calling the commenters rude? You’re telling us not to insult your dad’s girlfriend, but you’re posting a story about a girl who dresses different from you and the way you laughed in her face and you’re calling us disrespectful? It’s a good thing you told us that you’re twelve, child, because I would have thought you were much younger.

    Also, maybe make sure you proof read your post before you claim to be in the top 90%. Come on, my nephew can type better than that and he’s seven.

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    May 13th, 2012

  18. Gigi

    Are you SURE she didn’t hear you laugh? I’m emo/scene so i get talked about quite a lot, and when people do something like that i either give them a wtf-are-you-looking-at look, or i just walk by them pretending a didn’t hear them laughing, or i just give them a “Haha. Like i care?” look. Personally, i think you have no life and it’s very boring if this girl is so different to you..

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